Read paragraph 3. What could Kevin do to make it stronger?

A)Mention more detail about space

B)delete the first sentence

C)use Newton's first name

D)start a sentence with words other than ”He.”

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D.  Start a sentence with words other than "He" . It's to repetitive along with the periods. It doesn't flow well. Hope this helps you!
The answer is D start a sentence or