Which revision best removes the informal language from this passage?
(1) I believe that I would make an excellent receptionist at Animal Lovers Veterinary Clinic, because I have extensive customer service experience.

(2) As a cashier at Sir Save-a-Lot, I served an average of 70 customers per shift. (3) My customers were always satisfied, because, well, I'm basically a grocery-scanning fiend.

A.Change only sentence 1 to "I believe that I would make an excellent receptionist at Animal Lovers Veterinary Clinic, because I have a large amount of customer service experience."

B.Change only sentence 2 to "As a cashier at Sir Save-a-Lot, I had the opportunity to provide service to an average of 70 customers per shift."

C.Change only sentence 3 to "My customers were always satisfied, because of my speed, skill, and attention to detail."

D.There is no informal language, so no change is necessary.

Respuesta :

The answer is C because it doesn't properly explain why the customers were satisfied.

The revision best removes the informal language from the passage is changing only sentence 3 to "My customers were always satisfied, because of my speed, skill, and attention to detail."

What is informal language?

Informal language is the language that is used commonly to talk to people on a daily basis. It does not include technical words, and the words that are widely used constitute informal language.

Thus, the correct option is C.

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