Respuesta :
The answer is C because it doesn't properly explain why the customers were satisfied.
The revision best removes the informal language from the passage is changing only sentence 3 to "My customers were always satisfied, because of my speed, skill, and attention to detail."
What is informal language?
Informal language is the language that is used commonly to talk to people on a daily basis. It does not include technical words, and the words that are widely used constitute informal language.
Thus, the correct option is C.
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