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Read the passage.

For vim and vigor, drink VitaSip! This amazing new sports drink will make you feel energetic, clear-headed, and ready to face the world. VitaSip is full of vitamins and minerals for optimum health. And, VitaSip tastes good. So sip your way to better health. Drink VitaSip—It’s sip-ly delicious!

Which revision would make the advertisement more persuasive?



inserting a run-on sentence


citing expert opinion


using extraneous information


introducing an additional slogan